Topic 3: WHAT MAKES YOU HAPPY? WHY?
It is widely agreed that happiness is the dream of everyone. Happniess is state of mind or felling characterized by contentment , love, saticfaction, pleasure or joy. Happniess depends on different factors. Some people feel happy when they have love, health ,fame and so on. For me, there are three factors family, friendship and money that make me happy.
We can say that friendship is a source of happiness. It is very necessary in my life. It encourages me to do things . Sometimes I fall in a state of depression ,I do not have enough courage to overcome it. At that moment, my best friend is ready there to help me. She gives me relevance and makes me realize that life is still wonderful. Moreover, friendship helps me correct my mistakes. I myself rarely recognize my mistakes untill my best friend tell to me. She does not hesitate to tell me my faults and the way to correct. I fell very happy when I have beside me friends. It is said that “without friendship, this world will be dull”. The more friends we have, the happier we are!
To me, family is moral support. It help me overcome difficult situation in life. My grandmother and my father usually give me some advices when I am in difficulty. They make me confident and powerful to do things correctly, they are my motivation. Although they do not stay with me any more , I always believe that they still beside me, encourage me to be a good human. Furthermore, Family is a special place where I feel peaceful.After I finish my studies at school, I come back home , have dinner with my family and talk to them about my studies, my friends and anything. Whenever I think about my family, I feel happy.
Beside friendship and family, money is also important factor make me happy. Most people agreed that money is necessary . My life is very good and comfortable when I have a lot of money. I can buy everything I like and do whatever I want. Having money make me happy because it can make my younger sister happy. Money saves her life , I try to work hard to earn enough money to cure her disease . She feels healthy and happy now. I can not imagine how her life will be without money. It is said that “money is a good servant, but a bad master” if we know how to use money in necessary purposes, it will bring happiness for us.
In short, happiness is everyone’s dream. And I feel happy when I have above factors. Some people find it hard to locate where happiness is but there is a key to every door.If we have the heart to get along well with everything in life , we shall know how to search out the so-called happiness.”Most folks are about as happy as they make up their minds to be”(Abraham Lincoln).
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you need to show the reason why you feel happy when you have family, friendship and money
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i like your advice in the conclusion
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Trả lờiXóayou need to explain more clearly on the thesis statement.
you make mistakes in some puncturation(full stop should be used instead of comma in some sentences),in grammar(it help me...)